There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
Today, there are some dissimilar types of music in the world. However, I believe that traditional music is more momentous than international music with some reasons.
Music is expression of people to describe their feelings. Day by day, people have different way to explain it. All of countries are being a part of music and put it into their culture. We can see in festival, new year, and ceremony which have close part with song. Take one example Indonesia, one of nation which has many cultures and took music in their life. When Indonesian people face Ramadhan, they are fasting and will create...
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