The Internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that there have been a nummber of changes since the introduction of the Internet. Some claim that we are able to keep in touch with others regardless of place. However, others insist that the Internet reduces the chances for meeting and makes us unsociable.
There are some eople arguing that the Internet prevent peoplr from staying close each other. According to them, since people nowadays are accustomed to spend time on surfing internet, there are less chance to socializng. For example, when i was growing up, people live in neighborhood, gathered together and socialised almost everyday. However, along with internet development, people stopped chatting. Hence, it seems convincing that the more we spend time on internet, the less time we spend with our friends.
On the other hand, the other people say that by using Internet, people who are physically distant can become closer. This is highly beneficial to family if they stay apart. For instance, they can use internet which available costly and spend time such as skype to call. In addition, people in isolation can have fun by making new friends. In this sense, the internet play a significant role in socialising.
In conclusion, both views abe their own strange points. However, it seems that first one is more convincing.
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Essay evaluation report
the Internet prevent peoplr from staying close each other.
the Internet prevents people from staying close to each other.
there are less chance to socializng
there are less chances to socializing
they can use internet which available costly
they can use internet which is available costly
the internet play a significant role in socialising.
the internet plays a significant role in socialising.
it seems that first one is more convincing.
it seems that the first one is more convincing.
Sentence: It is true that there have been a nummber of changes since the introduction of the Internet.
Error: nummber Suggestion: number
Sentence: There are some eople arguing that the Internet prevent peoplr from staying close each other.
Error: eople Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: peoplr Suggestion: people
Sentence: According to them, since people nowadays are accustomed to spend time on surfing internet, there are less chance to socializng.
Error: socializng Suggestion: socializing
Sentence: In this sense, the internet play a significant role in socialising.
Error: socialising Suggestion: socializing
Sentence: In conclusion, both views abe their own strange points.
Error: abe Suggestion: are
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
Double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
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No. of Words: 215 350 //at least 250 words wanted
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 215 350
No. of Characters: 1050 1500
No. of Different Words: 137 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.829 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.884 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.432 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 18 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 14.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.093 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.733 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.323 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.54 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.099 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[4]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to spending'.
Suggestion: accustomed to spending
...ding to them, since people nowadays are accustomed to spend time on surfing internet, there are les...
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Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...chance to socializng. For example, when i was growing up, people live in neighbor...
^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...gathered together and socialised almost everyday. However, along with internet developme...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y a significant role in socialising. In conclusion, both views abe their own st...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08837209302 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59585724786 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618604651163 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6385748771 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.9333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260598422064 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803427644646 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598130388766 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141962158837 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536694316719 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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