Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Whether or not people choose to become vegetarian to have a healthy diet without need to eat meat has become a controversial in recent years. Although I agree that vegetarian diet afford a healthy diet for us, I do not believe that everyone should stop eating meat to enjoy good health.
On the one hand, vegetarian diet may provide health benefits in the prevention and treatment of certain diseases. Firstly, vegetarian appear to have lower low-density lipoprotein cholesterol levels, lower blood pressure, lower rates of hypertension and type 2 diabetes than non-vegetarian. Secondly,vegetarian diet could satisfy all your nutritonal requirements. Science has proven that vegetarian diet could be nutritionally sound and appropriate for all ages and stages of life, including infants, the elderly and even athletes.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages to take into consideration before becoming a vegetarian. Anecdotal evidence shows that vegetarian’s daily meals are not properly balanced, they might suffer from a lack of calories to meet them energy needs. As a consequence, they would feel lethargic or unable to do anything energetic. In addition, food which is eaten ra, steamed or stir-fried retains more vitamins and minerals than is boiled in water or deep-fried. For instance, culinary traditions such as those in Viet Nam which are encouraged to apply in processing vegetarian meals.
After discussing all the points mentioned above, I can finally conclude that it is imperative to throughly examine both positive and negative consequences before it can be applied, because a vegetarian dieat is not for everyone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether or not people choose to become vegetari...
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Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
Whether or not people choose to become vegetarian to h...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vegetarian
...2 diabetes than non-vegetarian. Secondly,vegetarian diet could satisfy all your nutritonal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47265625 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21147682134 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66796875 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3671736472 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.75 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354947680512 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113017299533 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116960394214 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200546791232 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.182448629145 0.056905535591 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.