you are planning to stay in a hotel in an English speaking country. You are writing to the hotel manager to find out some additional information. In your letter ask the following questions: • What the daily rate for one standard room is
What are the facilities in the hotel
Whether the hotel offers excursions to the nearby tourist sites
Dear Manager,
I am writing to ask for some information about your hotel where I am intending to stay from 23rd April 2017 and I hope that I would get answers to most of my questions which I would raise in the below paragraphs.
First of all, I would like to know the daily standard rates for one night stay at your hotel.
Secondly, I would be interested to know more details about the facilities at your hotel like availability of rooms for business meetings and an auditorium for speaking conferences which will be organized by my company. In addition to this, it would be great if an arrangement can be made for the recreational facilities like tea and snacks.
Finally, I would appreciate if you can provide me some more information on the excursions offered by the hotel. In particular, I would want to know that do you guys offer any road-trips to Picasso museum and Alfred national park which is hardly 200 miles from your hotel.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully
Faizal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, in addition, in particular, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72625698324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68616923034 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.0712806719 44.8134815571 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 4.34317383033 253% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228410894306 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104698429333 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040540373868 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127302471764 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374667745837 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 8.37731958763 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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