The table gives information about the percentages of the population working in the agriculture, manufacturing and services sectors in 7 different countries during 2014.
It is clear that services sector made up the largest proportion if employees in all countries. Additionally, the rates of agriculture workforces were lowest among three sectors
In 2014, nearly 84% of England employees had a job in services sector, while the proportion of services workers in Greece was slightly lower, at 80.6%. By contrast, Romania had the lowest rate of the population employed in services, at roughly 44%. Meanwhile, the percentages of services employees in Czech Republic and Ukraine were higher, at around 60% each.
As regard to manufacturing sector, with the exception of 37.4% of Czech Republic workforces worked in this industry, other countries' figures were all lower than 30%, with the lowest witnessed in Greece, at only 16%. The UK, France and Germany had the smallest proportions of agriculture workers compared to other countries, each had lower than 2% of employees worked in agriculture sector.
- The graph and pie chart below give information on in house training courses in a large financial company 78
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2030 84
- The map below is of the town of Gartsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town, The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- The chart below give information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. 38
- The charts below show the number of girls per 100 boys in all levels of education 88
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
.... As regard to manufacturing sector, with the exception of 37.4% of Czech Republic workforces work...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4476744186 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98488055009 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587209302326 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1612871268 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.857142857 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219630479569 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1121967449 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126642238698 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164513983036 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146146386981 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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