Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers influenced by advertisements. What can be done to protect them
In recent decades, commercials have been attracting a great deal of media attention due to its substantial impacts on customers' purchasing behaviours. Although the prooblems assciciated with influenced individual are pronounced, they are not without solutions
Advertisements could culminate in undesirable repurcussions on the customers. First, Due to an increasing demand for sales boost, Enterprises have a propensity to exaggerate the products's quality, which could put the consumers' health in jeopardy. For example, suggestible individuals are usually enticed to purchase some products with poisonous chemicals advertised on television, which coule make them more sensitive to some food-borne diseases especially cancers and diarherra. In addition, some online advertisements are prove to be a nuisance to some customers. In fact, some sex-related products such as comdoms are covering the website when customers surfs the Internet, leaving them the sense of annoyance and offence.
However there are several initiatives that the official authorities should undertake for the customers, safety. First, An increase in the cost of advertisements on mainstream media could be deterrent for the number of television commercials. This means that enterprises will be forced to conduct alternative product-promoting plans, which would approach the customers in more realistic and effective ways. Second, The government should impose heavy fines on negative advertisement. This would make the companies think twice if they have an intention of creating an unrealistic advertising videos as the pecunary damages could be equivalent to the profits they will earn.
In conclusion, commercial materials have an negative impacts on individuals' health and purchasing power. Some governmental legislations in would be instrumental in mitigating this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consumers'' or 'consumer's'?
Suggestion: consumers'; consumer's
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'proved', 'proven'.
Suggestion: proved; proven
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01132075472 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31758854206 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1438450703 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118888684679 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403431501315 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356039416006 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0617127122805 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323023533718 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.58 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.88 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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