Do you feel that it is good idea for governments to place a restriction on the number of children a family can have in order to control rising population numbers.
Looking into the recent figures of world census, it becomes a highly debatable question if the responsibility of curbing the population lien on a shoulder of government. Many adepts believe that government intervention only is the effective solution to this complex issue. Thus, I strongly believe that government should decide the number of children per family in favor of robust economy and bright future of the nation.
First and foremost, when citizens forget their responsibility towards the family and nation, a government has to take stern steps to streamline the situations because ultimately governments are held responsible for facilitating their citizens. To illustrate, in India, we do not have any strict rules on controlling child birth rate but when the question raised on increased inflation, education cost and other sustenance, public use to curse the government. Hence, a government should don a right to amend a regulation on limiting the number of kids per parents. Moreover, a healthy youth is the base of bright future of any country. however, the higher birth rate may result in poor health of children due to the lack of enough supplement. For example, countries like Brazil, Ghana, and Bangladesh, kids are affected by malnutrition due to the inadequate supply of food.More to it, providing the better education, cheaper medication and regular employment to this future generation is also the responsibility of government.
Conversely, while the family has to decide how many children they can afford to raise, the pre-declared ratio of childbirth per family will help to follow the rule in sustaining the economy of family and nation. To exemplify, regulation like taxes on having more than two children can enforce family to limit their family in order to provide a better lifestyle. Moreover, there are arguments of educating the people about the benefits of population control in place of imposing stern rules. But, the countries where the literacy ratio is very low, people fail to understand the discourse on population control.
To sum up, when the birth rates are affecting the growth of nation and existence of human being, I strongly recommend addressing the issue by structuring rules and regulations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, as to, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1899.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31932773109 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94831732845 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.7578913502 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.642857143 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23296788477 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694189858425 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513517419958 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118019816773 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829854459007 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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