In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
It is certainly true that nowadays in some countries more and more people have become overweight and it is affecting their health and fitness levels. There are various reasons for these particular problems and measures should be taken to improve people health conditions.
The main reasons for these alarming problems often lie in the changes in modern lifestyles. Firstly, the appearance of various fast food chains contributes greatly to the overweight problem in most developed countries. Pizza, fried chicken and instant foods have become favourites among the young adults because of its addicting flavour. However, they mostly contain too much oil, sugar and unresolved fat which are extremely harmful to people's health. Secondly, the advances in technology have also made big impacts on people lifestyles and their levels of health and fitness. For example, a lot of people have now taken up watching TV or surfing the Internet as their hobbies instead of playing sports or doing outdoor activities.
To reduce the number of overweight people and promote healthy lives, there are several things that we can do. People should be more selective in choosing their diets. We should avoid consuming fast foods which contain high cholesterol ingredients. Instead, green foods such as vegetables or whole grain are proved to be healthy. We should spend a daily budget of time for exercising or playing sports and engaging in social activities. To defeat the bad effects of modern lifestyle, people can also think about changing the way they commute, such as riding bicycles instead of driving cars.
In conclusion, the number of overweight people in western countries has increased and their health and fitness levels are declining. However, we can easily solve these problems by changing our bad habits which are negatively affected by modern lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31525423729 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57547713008 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6850115936 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250437326981 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827556106504 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073299526666 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178935681994 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072453665724 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.