To maintain our natural atmosphere pollution free a bicycle is a good way for mass transit. But it is not commonly used by many .
This essay will first discuss which elements leads to popularising the advantages of bicycle and it will then address the questions how lightly people can develop a healthy life style by adopting the method of cycling.
We live in a blue planet but due to this inhumane activities their is a serious threat for its extinction,Transportation play a vital role in our life's without it we are shun,precisely we are over using it which causes a dramatic inaccessability of natural resources .our surroundings are full of unwanted gases which has resulted in global warming. Recently times reported that polar ice caps are melting at a rapidly high speed then a past few years and this all is because of more amount carbon in our atmosphere.
According to general physician Dr Albert Watson of st. Mary's hospital in UK cycling is not only beneficial for our health it also safeguard our body from orthopedic problems which we face in our older age.People in this century are living a Hustle and Bustle life where there is not any pause at all .The urge to reach on time , leave the traffic behind has become a routine part of life. A good precedent set by china where a majority of the peoples prefer to ride on bicycle than on any other transits
The governing authorities should imply a strict rules to follow the method to cycling once in a week atleast, inorder to give the air not any extra gases which indeed affects us very dreadfully
In conclusion cycling is not only eco-friendly it also a most viable solution to stop pollution and also help us to maintain our health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71666666667 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85650297176 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.619941164 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.875 106.682146367 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.5 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0879514412707 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357406730669 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0370535683365 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426774393637 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0172748540278 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.6 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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