I agree the statement which states that the no challenge so difficult, no goals so impossible for the following reasons. Everyone, we learn from our mistakes, goals and targets. Otherwise, we cannot improver our knowledge, positive approaches and the skills which is needed for better life. Here, I want explain some point to support my point of view.
First of all, trail and error are essentials for the successes. For example, Thomas Edition who invented electricity, met so many failure in his life, even sometime he was beaten by strange person for his scientific approach but, now, the world prizing for his incredible innovation which further put the path other scientists in electric and electronic field. Though, he was struggled by so many negative incidents, he got the name and fame through his mistakes, challenges. Very few may be get the credit without any challenge and they are few of them exceptional. In reality, challenges makes people to feel the even difficult task into easiest one.
Secondly, knowledge can be acquired through the challenge that we faces, it is not inborn. For example, Gandhi was great non violence leader in our country which he achieved through racial violence in south Africa when he became one of the victim in that brutal events and he red Murtin Luther Junior books which brought more knowledge in his life. He implemented the acquired knowledege in Indian congress and became popular leader in our country. Certain people like Brahmin's caste in our societes- they are inborn genes. But, it is not applicable everyone in our community or country. In some they also faced more problems and from that they got further knowledge.
Thirdly, One who want make it everything possible then he or she might have strong goal, othewise things goes in vein. For example, S.Raman had goal that he wants become great scientist from the childhood onwards that driven him to noble prize in light spectrum in physics. Goal is key achieve all sort of victories. Without goal, people simply wast their precises time rather than improve themselves. Few people, may reach the success without goal, that all about their luck which not permnanent, it may vanish at any point in our life time.
To sum, In order to be a knowledgeable, success and skillful person we need to face certain challenges and we should have some goals in our, so that, we can become speakable in our societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun failure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many failures'.
Suggestion: many failures
...dition who invented electricity, met so many failure in his life, even sometime he was beate...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little may'.
Suggestion: little may
... through his mistakes, challenges. Very few may be get the credit without any challenge...
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Line 3, column 636, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'into the easiest'.
Suggestion: into the easiest
... people to feel the even difficult task into easiest one. Secondly, knowledge can be acqu...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'face', 'fax'
Suggestion: face; fax
... acquired through the challenge that we faces, it is not inborn. For example, Gandhi ...
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Line 7, column 111, Rule ID: IN_VEIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in vain' (=unsuccessfully)?
Suggestion: in vain
... have strong goal, othewise things goes in vein. For example, S.Raman had goal that he ...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Raman
...ise things goes in vein. For example, S.Raman had goal that he wants become great sci...
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Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "wants become" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'become' or 'to be become'.
Suggestion: become; to be become
...example, S.Raman had goal that he wants become great scientist from the childhood onwa...
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Line 7, column 533, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...nent, it may vanish at any point in our life time. To sum, In order to be a knowledgea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, even so, for example, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2022.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 406.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9802955665 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54422409975 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57881773399 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4112302907 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2857142857 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.076153581902 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240475927014 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282554602861 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468800414791 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156950611567 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 0.67 Out of 6
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