Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views
Many people suppose that university or college is the best way to prepare for their career path, whereas others believe working right after shcool is much better .While there are benefits to go for higher education, there are also good reasons to work after highschool.
On the one hand, there are some merits to continue the education program at higher level. Firstly, higher education can help young people lay a good foundation for the life ahead of them. Studying at university gives them countless oppotunities to build strong relationships, especially with professors or experts at university who are able to help students write a letter of recommendation to land a good job. Secondly, youngsters are capable of learning academic knowledge, which cannot be achieved if they choose to work right after highschool. This knowledge is useful for a quick progress in the future career. For example, if young people want to work as white-collar workers, they must study appropriate academic knowledge such as business management, human resources or marketing.
On the other hand, the idea that working straight after highschool is beneficial in some ways. It is a common knowledge that working straight after highschool instead of pursuing higher education can help youngsters collect practical working experiences. If they do not want to go for higher education, they can begin to seek a job as early as possible. As a result, they are likely to start their professional career sooner than their fellows . Moreover, young people can live independently on their own income without asking for financial support from their parents for the reason that they are able to earn money by themselves to meet basic human needs.
In conclusion, it seems evident that both going for higher education at university or college and working right after school are advantageous in their own ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20723684211 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78624100557 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555921052632 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6146401939 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21958476621 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778314840058 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681735017289 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156839929459 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581376617248 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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