In today 's modern world,art is not receiving much attention as it was receiving in previously .People depend on technology and turn their focus on science, technology and business practices.Art represents different things of a country such as culture, tradition,and so on.
Mainly there are two reasons that art receiving very less attention. First of all, Humans depends on technology to live with and science to survive on this earth, specifically to fight disease. Technology gives a comfortable environment for human to live with and useful effects of medicine on disease.So people turned their research on mainly these areas.Second reason is that business helps country to grow their economy ,welfare of country and to expand employment opportunities.There are many ways to turn this focus to art.
Government can educate the students by opening art school for students who are interested in art and expand employment opportunities for art graduates in art fields . Government can truly award the young artist by holing art exhibitions and showcase this talents. This in turn can attract lot of people's attention. In schools, teachers can teach subjects relates to arts where future of world residing.Also, teachers can develop artistic skill among students.
In crux, there are many reasons for this trend. some initial steps need to be taken by government that indeed can attract people focus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37556561086 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99577659048 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.1381369131 49.4020404114 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.8 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216315677617 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818401067189 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533130653037 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131740861666 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471503452924 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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