The first pie chart explains about the energy consumption in an average Australian household. Other pie chart gives the results about gas emissions of the households which are contributed by energy use in other pie chart.
First of all, Heating has highest average percentage of household energy use than others. Comparing heating, water heating is 12 % less. Following water heating, other appliances has more percentage of energy use in households.it holds 15 % of average energy use. In addition that, refrigeration, lighting and cooling almost less than 10% .The refrigeration holds 7% and lighting has 2 percentage more than cooling. Cooling has lowest percentage of 2 % in average energy use.
In second pie chart, Water heating has highest percentage of greenhouse gas emission than all others. Other appliances has 45 percentage less than water heating .Following other appliances, Heating and refrigeration has almost same percentage of greenhouse gas emission of 15 and 14 percentage. Cooling and lighting has less than 10%. Lighting holds 8% percentage of total pie chart. Cooling has lowest in greenhouse gas emissions same as in energy use.
To conclude, water heating has most percentage in both energy use and greenhouse gas emissions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44615384615 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94204816122 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.425641025641 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3663354833 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6923076923 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0177634343802 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.011482505411 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289356323238 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.010041413438 0.15604864568 6% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100444253294 0.0819641961636 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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