Teaching is a novel profession. Some people thinks that teacher get more respect , apprecication and got value in past rather than resent days.according to me i think I agree with that statement. I feel this way for few reasons, which i will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, development of educational system are main reasons for disrespect of teacher. In past most of the student are dependent on teacher now student are depend on technology that why student are not involve with closely to there teacher, for that reasons student don't respect to there teacher. my father told me haw they are respect there teacher. My own experience is a good example of this. Few days ago i am traveling with my father suddenly he stop and talk with a old man. When i ask father who is that man, he told me this old man his first teacher. Then i suddenly understood haw they respect there teacher.
Secondly, teaching profession are no longer a novel profession. because, modern teacher are more commercial they think only about money not about student. In past time teacher think more about student and there future, That's why they try hard ans sole to give them there best to educate students. This sacrifice make a respect for them. However, today's teacher are not capable to make that respectable position for them, lack of concern and awareness are main cause.
Finally, modern education system have lack of morals values because various types of subject included in education system that make student are less attractive for morals values. This is one of the major cause of disrespect to teacher.
In sum, in past time teacher are more valuable person in society because they are only person to read and write very well. Only educated person involve in teaching. However, modern education system make it more commercial and disrespectful to the student. For that reasons i think teacher in past get more respect and valuable than present.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...more respect and valuable than present.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, i feel, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89457831325 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52589150116 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487951807229 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6940837377 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.380952381 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.45110844103 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.5376344086 361% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203295459841 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636039705364 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558040089708 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120729103478 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510047946263 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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