hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable
Some people say that complicated favorites are necessary to be enjoyable. In my opinion, I absolutely disapprove with this idea
Firstly, everybody has a lot of hobbies that are eventually different with others, so hobbies are simple or difficult according to each one. Secondly, some people are interested in simple hobbies and feel them suitable for its. They still enjoy without caring about its complication. For example, if you love drawing, you will be very happy and excited when doing that though drawing is quite easy. Finally, hobbies depend on your passion. If you like doing something, you will try your best and then feel it easy. However, these hobbies may be difficult with others. For instance, some dangerous hobbies such as parachute jump, go mountaineering can make someone interested but not compared to others.
In conclusion, hobbies are dependent on your passion and ability, so the difficulty of hobbies is absolutely unimportant. You just need to do what you want and then it will bring enjoyment to you.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 169.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13017751479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77012831255 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5119438338 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3636363636 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296694716226 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107314355898 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866489509013 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171265565609 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620664208671 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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