Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
It is often argued that the global warming situation in the twenty first is happening because of the factories and industries are using coal and fossil fuel to generate energy instead of using solar power energy. By the passage of time, the air pollution has disrupted the nature and temperature of the world has increased steadily as compare to previous centuries.
Firstly, climate of earth has changed dramatically during last few year, some countries are facing extreme heat waves, while others are going through the storms and tornadoes. Due to air pollution children and adults have various disease and breathing problems like sinus. These problems are generating due to industries and factories running on fossil fuels. To overcome these environmental changes, some giant companies has already decided to use energy efficient systems like solar panel technology.
However, the industries which are working in Asian continent have contrary view on the use of solar system. They have a different perspective; their factories can’t survive a day without oil and gas, because heavy machinery cannot survive on electricity produced by wind and solar panel system. On the contrary, we have example of well-developed cities are producing electricity through solar system like las-Vegas and Florida. But to convert the whole system on solar, its requires enormous amount of money and funds which deter the industries and corporation.
To conclude the above discussion, humans need to take some urgent decisions to overcome the environmental pollution, even it’s a responsibility of government to take some steps in order to prevent the extreme usage of Oil and gas fuel in production environment. So then we can provide polluted free air to breath to our next generation.
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- The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-first
...hat the global warming situation in the twenty first is happening because of the factories a...
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Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun year seems to be countable; consider using: 'few years'.
Suggestion: few years
...th has changed dramatically during last few year, some countries are facing extreme heat...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, well, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83832193885 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8730503643 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199373891001 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635441531725 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498937572277 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113888360427 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358912298158 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.