Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that history play a crucial role apprehending the present situation. While some individuals deny the importance of history in our life, I would argue that it is extremely essential to know history in order to better comprehend what is going on around us.
On the one hand, some people think that history have a faint function for various reasons. Firstly, most people memorize dates, names and facts when they looking back to the past, which is not useful in everyday life or for the future. Secondly, each historical event has different perspectives. For this reason, it makes learning history a waste of time because events can also be interpreted in a different way which makes what we learn in history less valuable.
On the other hand, I believe that it is worth having profound insights into history in order to understand the present. The first reason is history shows patterns of behavior or events in the past and their outcome which can help us avoid repeating the mistakes in the future. Furthermore, data from the past allows humanity to look at how people and places shifted and analyze causes of change around us today. For example, if we are equipped with relevant knowledge of history, it will be more easier for us to fully understand the evolution of mankind.
In conclusion, although there are some drawback to history role in our life, it seems to me that human should have a knowledge of history in order to understand the present.
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- The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country’s development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Fast food is now universally available in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while other do not. What about your opinions on this? 89
- The charts show information about the number of UK university students and government spending and types of student s family economic background in 1991 82
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... because events can also be interpreted in a different way which makes what we learn in history le...
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Line 5, column 492, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...levant knowledge of history, it will be more easier for us to fully understand the evolutio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83794466403 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56538486758 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7227910339 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.272727273 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304391100001 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111008024939 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574628943557 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182383597406 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331719227817 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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