Do you agree or disagree? The teachers had a greater influence on the young people in the past than they do today.
The question is whether the teachers had much more impact on their students in the past in compared with today's or not. Everyone with regard to his private view point can maintain a specific direction toward this statement; however, I am inclined to affirm the valid of this issue. I feel this way for some reasons, which I will explore them to empower my vantage point in following essay:
To begin with, nobody could overlook that teachers play a crucial role in our life. Without them and their endeavors students will not be able to achieve breakthrough. Besides their eminent knowledge, they have always attempted to create a friendly relationship with their students; however, since the world has changed; as a result, this relationship is challenged by the technology. Nowadays, students -such as other social strata- obtain their needed information through internet; consequently, the young's self-confidence has increased. Unfortunately, there is a wrong conviction among youths that no one knows more than them; hence, their teacher's behavior or actions cannot affect them.
The second reason why I advocate this idea lies the reality that such a modern world is wrestling with economics crises; therefore, the governments have confronted lack of budget. One way for solving this problem has been that the rulers have tried to decrease the teachers' salary and other state's staff. In such a frustrating circumstance, people prefer to reduce time and energy consuming related to their work. It goes without saying that not only the quality of teaching, but also the dedicated time for students will be lessened and the students can be the first victims of this calamity. I remember when I was studying in high school, once our teachers protested for their right and they did not participate in the class for a long time, so the destructive consequence of this event is obvious.
Moreover, today’s personality of human beings has also altered. In the past, the young people were usually modest and kind; however, in these days and ages, egotistical feeling is ruling in the societies. It is often said that the young would rather imitate their friends' behavior and ignore their teacher and family.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that teachers had a close relationship with their class and they devoted much time for giving some piece of advice to students but now some factors like economic troubles and improving technology have created a big gap between them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teachers'' or 'teacher's'?
Suggestion: teachers'; teacher's
...t the rulers have tried to decrease the teachers salary and other states staff. In such ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, therefore, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2088.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15555555556 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70638685285 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595061728395 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3965524615 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3125 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11707042341 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429307593772 0.076458572812 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0396675148102 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745343057414 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302628998306 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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