computers make life easier
Some people think that computers make our life more complex. People think that the more use of computer the more stress our life become. Although I understand their point of view, I have a different opinion. I believe that computer make our life easier and more convenient. The basis of my opinion is educational, social and personal.
From an educational speaking, computers make student’s life easier. Students nowadays have access to a variety of online classes, which facilitate the way of education for many students. Online classes are more convenient for many students who are not able to study in the real university classes, some students are not able to drive or even some moms students want to continue their education, thus educational online classes is the best choice of those. Computers made it feasible to many students to access the internet, many students can surf the internet and do their project right away, they do not have to go to the library and waste their time. Computers consider being the best way for students to do their project and finish their work in the promise time.
Socially, after the invention of computers people can easily communicate, there are many social interactions among peoples, for example, the facbook the skype. In the past people were not able to communicate easily, there were limited facility of communication like telephone or through letters and that take forever. But nowadays with the new methods of communication people can increase their social net work instantly; people are able to chat with each other all over the world. Computers make it convenient for us to do good deals in our work, for instant because there are emails companies are able to communicate and deal with each others for the best.
Personally, computers are the best way to do shopping, it easy to stay at home and just open you computer and surf the internet. More convenient for me to check the prices and compare many items through the computer rather than taking my kids and go shopping with them. Moreover, computer make my life easier I used to use pen and paper to write down all my notes, but now after the invention of the computer I learned hoe to type and use the computer to save all my important file, there is no need for more papers.
In conclusion, for the reason stated above, I believe that computer make our life much easier and facilitate the way we live. Computers also are more convenient to use. I don’t think that computers stress people out.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 420, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to hoe'
Suggestion: to hoe
...the invention of the computer I learned hoe to type and use the computer to save al...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, even so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 430.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89534883721 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55372829156 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56447945879 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458139534884 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 681.3 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.9975197924 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.25 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36249862309 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150495669655 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.173070213373 0.0737576698707 235% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263957784995 0.150856017488 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133140161196 0.0645574589148 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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