Women as a mother are regarded as a homemaker and a child are nearest to their mother. A woman spends most of her time shape, nurture and takes care about her child. There is a controversy on who should be blamed for misbehavior of a child. Some argue that woman should be blamed for a child’s misbehavior. I disaccord that woman should be blamed for the misbehavior of a child, I would discuss about not only women but whole family member and their environment influences behavior of a child.
It is said that first school of a child is their home and their parents are their first teacher. A child learn from their home and get influenced from the environment they are living in. as child behavior nature plays a vital role.
In current situation to a child up-bring with proper virtue, behavior and conscience is a great challenge.The environment in which a child live, the friends with home a child spend their most of time also influence their behavior. It is total unfair to blame only a woman for the misbehavior of a child. A children learns about good and bad from the their mother. And a mother or woman always try to make their children well mannered. The influential factor like environment, their friends, the technology they use, the TV shows that they follow regularly can be responsible for their misbehavior. A child should be brought up by making them known about the consequence of their misbehavior.
In conclusion, woman is not only responsible for a child behavior. Rather that blaming anyone whole family should create a beautiful environment for a child to promote their good virtue.
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Suggestion: A child; Children
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
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Suggestion: Rather,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90254237288 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.782511328 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.958799909 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263772686743 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12794086256 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140443493834 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182955415958 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586943982243 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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