Some people think that we can use animals in any way for the benefits of human beings. Other disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a lot of controversy about using animals for a variety of human needs. Several people argue that human can exploit animals for any purposes while the others believe that animals should have the same right as people. This essay will discuss both views.
To begin with, it is undeniable that animals play a vital role in the human life. First and foremost, some animals are used by people to assist them in producing and providing foods. For example, in Viet Nam, cows and buffalos are spent by farmers to cultivate their farming areas and some kinds of meat such as beef, kitchen are considered as a staple source of food. Moreover, animals have a great contribution on developing medical field. In details, several animals are used in certain specific experiments or medical testing before applying on health of people. As a result, thousands of patients are saved thanks to these experiments.
On the other hand, some people think that we should stop killing and using animals to fulfill their needs. Firstly, over-exploitation affects negatively on both sides. For example, a range of endangered species are dying away and be extinct due to excessive hunting. In addition, it is unacceptable to kill animals for entertainment and profits. The fact shows that Hunting precious species for trading is illegal and people do not have right to disrespect other lives on the earth.
In conclusion, although animals supply a various of things for human, people only should exploit them by some suitable ways and reasonable quantity to meet the human needs in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01515151515 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61234047804 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5902440576 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357284725427 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107425313124 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757493089972 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218528268638 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060059954057 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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