In this modern era, many people said that it is exploits them to use animals as they need, while some people are opposite side of them, Before give my opinion, I would like to discuss both the views in the forthcoming paragraph.
To initiate with, human and animals have strong bonding in any age for long time. It is a land mutualism between them. For instance, according to study, fact is those domesticated animals survive longer than those living in the world. Man is also known as social animals. Moreover, man is a superior animal, so it is his natural dominance that he use.
On the other hand, animals makes our life easy and to a certain extent luxury, and helps in division of labour. They can help us in many spheres of life, if animals are used intelligently. For example, dogs are used in many police verification, hens or chicken use for poultry, bullocks work as ploughing. Furthermore, animals can save people's life either by researching on these animals or by taking help of their sixth sense.
To recapitulate, animals are exploited for many reasons like clothes, searching some important evidence, for improving health. In my opinion it is not good to use animals as humans need them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77511961722 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60617577963 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655502392344 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.0936604869 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4166666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320871359678 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101164901996 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695481181407 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187291009048 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439777993657 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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