The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops
The diagram illustrate the way in which coffee is made. Overall, there are eleven different stages before coffee is being packed for use. The process begin with the picking of coffee beans and ends at the packing stage.
Looking at the coffee production in detail, coffee beans must be first picked, these beans are then dried, roasted and cooled before being put in a grinding machine which turn the beans into granules. At the sixth stage in the process, the ground coffee is mixed into hot water and the resulting mixture is strained. After that the mixture is frozen and then passed once again through the grinder. After that the ground frozen liquidi is dried in a vacuum so that the water evaporates, leaving the coffee granules.
Finally, the granules are packed into coffee jars for delivery.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the way in which coffee is made. Overal...
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Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eleven different stages before coffee is being packed for use. The process begin ...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is strained. After that the mixture is frozen and then passed once again throug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 672.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 137.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90510948905 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42121322205 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13954542913 2.65546596893 81% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 106.607317073 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1782280206 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134185845919 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704977675526 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447908445625 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11155848622 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034487222061 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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