The reading passage supports the assumption that dinosaurs were endotherms. However, the lecture provides some facts that refutes this idea.
First, according to the reading passage, dinosaur fossils have been discovered in polar regions where only endotherms can be active. In the lecture, the professor disagrees with this opinion. She thinks the polar region was warmer than it is today and it was warm enough for a non-endotherm to live. During the cold months in Polar region, dinosaurs could migrate or habitat to accommodate the weather.
Second, the reading passage suggests that dinosaurs had legs underneath their body to keep constant physical activity like running, which is the feature of the modern endotherm. The lecture argues that the leg underneath the body rather that at the side of the body could support more weight, allowing them to grow much larger. A large size will benefit the dinosaur. Therefore, there is no need for them to run.
Third, the reading passage indicates that the unique bone structure call Haversian canals allow dinosaurs to grow rapidly. In the lecture, the professor brings up a new structure on called growth ring restricting the speed of the constant growth of dinosaurs. The professor says dinosaurs grew in a periodical way that is grow rapidly first and then the process slow down or stop and then grow rapidly again. This isn't a feature of endotherms who keep growing rapidly.
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Essay evaluation report
the lecture provides some facts that refutes this idea.
the lecture provides some facts that refutes this idea.
the lecture provides some facts refuting this idea.
the unique bone structure call Haversian canals allow dinosaurs to grow rapidly.
the unique bone structure which is called Haversian canals allows dinosaurs to grow rapidly.
the unique bone structure called Haversian canals allows dinosaurs to grow rapidly.
Sentence: The professor says dinosaurs grew in a periodical way that is grow rapidly first and then the process slow down or stop and then grow rapidly again.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and grow
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 24 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 12
No. of Words: 235 250
No. of Characters: 1167 1200
No. of Different Words: 141 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.915 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.966 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.463 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 69 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.193 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.33 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.548 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.084 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a periodical way" with adverb for "periodical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...aurs. The professor says dinosaurs grew in a periodical way that is grow rapidly first and then the...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...osaurs grew in a periodical way that is grow rapidly first and then the process slow...
^^^^
Line 7, column 415, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... stop and then grow rapidly again. This isnt a feature of endotherms who keep growin...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, second, so, then, therefore, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1373.03311258 88% => OK
No of words: 234.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53853348196 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606837606838 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 419.366225166 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.8483324277 49.2860985944 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1428571429 110.228320801 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 21.698381199 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372142777181 0.272083759551 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11284451817 0.0996497079465 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066999483964 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202499975231 0.162205337803 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334492114744 0.0443174109184 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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