Everyone want want to better in their life in terms financial support, power, wealth and other resources because human always they tend to be safe and secure life style. This easy agrees the statement which says that nowadays people are never satisfied with what they are having in their hands. Here, we are going explain about the fact and events which is happening everyday life. So that we can understand how mind tuned towards the material world irrespective of moral thoughts. It is pathetic situation in our society which must be reformed.
First of all, people psychology is entirely different from the other animals, we initial think getting fundamental stuffs are more sufficient to lead our life peacefully, when time progress, we look further sophisticated form life. For example, those who are above poverty line they will look for betterment life, once, they reached their target then, they guest for for the lavish life like getting new model car, taking independent houses and often vacation trips. So, even though, if they say this life more comfortable for them but still their mind never allow them to stop searching high level life style in order to gain the social status in community, because our society gives more respect and honor to those who are wealth and power. No matter the personal life good or bad, their money cover up everything. Some of them even if they have more wealth, their mind never satisfied because they are looking for rule the people and society. Apart from that it gives security, not only for their family but also for the entire generation including the future generation of their family. For example, chief minister K.C.R, he was wealthy man he spent all his wealth only for come to power. Some people not satisfied because they want to be more popular on all the time regardless of age. For example, Thomas invent the electricity but he never stopped his research until his death, just keep his popularity always live in this world.
In some case may be satisfied with what they have, like those are meditating for human prosperity and well being. They are very fewer people and they are exceptional like Gandhi. Even, some organisation social service without thinking about themselves which is needed for current situation.
In conclusion, the number unsatisfied persons out weight the number of satisfied persons in our real world. So, the overall impact is based on unsatisfied people's mind set that is unavoidable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: want
Everyone want want to better in their life in terms financ...
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Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...vents which is happening everyday life. So that we can understand how mind tuned toward...
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Suggestion:
... progress, we look further sophisticated form life. For example, those who are ab...
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Suggestion: for
...y reached their target then, they guest for for the lavish life like getting new model ...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...y gives more respect and honor to those who are wealth and power. No matter the persona...
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Suggestion: R
...family. For example, chief minister K.C.R, he was wealthy man he spent all his we...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Thomas) must be used with a third-person verb: 'invents'.
Suggestion: invents
... regardless of age. For example, Thomas invent the electricity but he never stopped hi...
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...ry fewer people and they are exceptional like Gandhi. Even, some organisation soc...
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...d peoples mind set that is unavoidable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2071.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00241545894 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37555075352 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56038647343 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.169872546 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7894736842 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.68421052632 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197197231513 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732213201591 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884576979485 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128029367995 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584622926806 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.