The reading passage and the speaker discussing factor which cause amnesia in childhood life. Both reading and lecturer support their concept by stating their evidence and supporting theory.
Firstly, reading passage says that amnesia mean inability remember the events it could be immediate, recent or long ago events, if there is any difficulty remember these events then we called as amnesia. And it is every common in childhood because because when somebody says that he did this and that there is exact no way to check his statements because it is oral statements. We prove it. This is according to Freud's concept.
Secondly, speaker states that hippo campus place where the all memory store in this part and it is part of brain which develop after 2 to 3 years of life that reasons children are not able to remember which happens in their life. But after three years of life the hippo campus becoming well mature till sixty years old, there after gradually declining.
Thirdly, professor explains that how the child and adult are remembering the events. For example the child remember the events randomly, as a result the memory will be ever lasting whereas adult remember the events by means organised pattern so they can not remember the all events like child. Only they can remember the organised pattern events not all the events in their life.
Finally, both the lecturer and the professor suggests their statements regarding how the children and adult are remember the events and what are the factor affecting memory power. Both them sticky on their concept regarding child memory and specific amnesia.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: because
...ia. And it is every common in childhood because because when somebody says that he did this and...
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...s of life the hippo campus becoming well mature till sixty years old, there after...
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Suggestion: thereafter
...ming well mature till sixty years old, there after gradually declining. Thirdly, profes...
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...r explains that how the child and adult are remembering the events. For example the child remem...
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Suggestion: remembered
...egarding how the children and adult are remember the events and what are the factor affe...
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...ding child memory and specific amnesia.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'firstly', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272413793103 0.261695866417 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.155172413793 0.158904122519 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.051724137931 0.0723426182421 71% => OK
Adverbs: 0.048275862069 0.0435111971325 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0620689655172 0.0277247811725 224% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0965517241379 0.128828473217 75% => OK
Participles: 0.0413793103448 0.0370669169778 112% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.31042611854 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0137931034483 0.0208969081088 66% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00154638098197 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106896551724 0.128158765124 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0137931034483 0.0158828679856 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0310344827586 0.0114777025283 270% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1629.0 1645.83664459 99% => OK
No of words: 269.0 271.125827815 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.05576208178 6.08160592843 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04852973271 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.371747211896 0.374372842146 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.275092936803 0.287516216867 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174721189591 0.187439937562 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0855018587361 0.113142543107 76% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31042611854 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527881040892 0.539623497131 98% => OK
Word variations: 51.7398513318 53.8517498576 96% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0529801325 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6923076923 21.7502111507 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9155816581 49.3711431718 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.307692308 132.220823453 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 21.7502111507 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.23076923077 0.878197800319 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.39072847682 177% => OK
Readability: 48.2016013726 50.5018328374 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.54545454545 1.90840788429 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333981614471 0.549887131256 61% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.186396124877 0.142949733639 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.149323155638 0.0787303798458 190% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.63841955644 0.631733273073 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.192658530661 0.139662658121 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131374583623 0.266732575781 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768113454283 0.103435571967 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.227949453253 0.414875509568 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.131304526529 0.0530846634433 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18664475076 0.40443939384 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595730844399 0.0528353158467 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.26048565121 188% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.49668874172 29% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.62251655629 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.1766004415 126% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.2958057395 68% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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