In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays communication became easier with help of rapid technologies. These technologies help people from around the world to communicate with each other at any time and from any place. This is to say, essential information is riffed by means of technology. Modern people became dependent to gadgets and tools that provide necessary knowledge. This stipulated that in the modern world, the image is becoming more powerful way of communicating than the written world. I agree with this opinion and in the following essay will explain the reasons.
The key aspect to consider is that our century is the century of technologies. Most of the world population owns at least one gadget, that is main way to gain knowledge and share own diversity. People are hooked on these tools and spend most of their time using them. For this reason, people prefer to communicate with way of the image. In the result this way of communication is becoming powerful. Many campaigns are held around the world, most of them use photographs or films to share main idea. This method of approach is convenient and counts to attract community members. Another key point to consider, people prefer to gain essential information from movies, rather from books, because watching movie can take maximum 2 hours, does not require critical thinking and is easy to perceive, however books are considered to be one of the best mean to gain knowledge, become independent and skillful, but reading it can take from 1 week to 1 month. People live with rapid pace of life and don’t consider reading books advantageous, however while watching a film one can not get the same emotion and knowledge while reading. The most persuasive is, that slideshows and images can express essential information only with picture and phrase or word, that can understand even youngster, who is not fully developed.
All things considered, we should conclude, that the above mention issue is correct. More and more people prefer to gain knowledge from “the image”, because it is easier to access and to perceive, does not require much time. I believe that films and photographs are becoming powerful, but there are things that can be found only in books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0408719346 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71075127161 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523160762943 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0724199976 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3684210526 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3157894737 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94736842105 5.45110844103 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215669855657 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732526338171 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111835766414 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155199924214 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597470606294 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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