Some people think that if a country is already rich any addition in economic wealth does not make its citizens happier. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Advancement in technology has accelerated the economic growth of different nations. Presently, some people opine that improvement in the economy does not reflect the happiness of people living in omnipotent nations. Here, i would like to discord with the given statement.
There are manifold points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, economic development could be lucrative for financial status of people. To justify, employees who work in distinct sectors get a boost in their wages if a country succeeds in strengthening economy. Thus, the level of richness is maximised and peo...
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: Some people may disagree with the statement; however, i still believe that the boost in economy is profitable and people realise it's impact on their happiness.
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to it's and impact
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 8.0 out of 9
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 347 350
No. of Characters: 1779 1500
No. of Different Words: 196 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.316 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.127 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.684 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 144 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 45 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.773 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.438 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.272 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.48 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.025 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ment in the economy does not reflect the happiness of people living in omnipotent...
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Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ple living in omnipotent nations. Here, i would like to discord with the given st...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the strongest'.
Suggestion: with the strongest
...s aristocratic. What is more, a country with strongest economy can prevent its people from pro...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Further,
...he presence of economic prosperity. Further emphasising on my point of view, strong...
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Line 7, column 392, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than happy from the safety standards of their country. Apart from it, enhancemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, such as, as a result, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31700288184 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80009111653 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5734870317 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9950410149 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8636363636 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7727272727 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13636363636 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224922142184 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583913314926 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427575845323 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122410155321 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210956742181 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.