The issue of many wealthy countries which gravitate towards boosting more economic prosperity has provoked public excitement. While some people argue that this would not make citizens feel happier, others, me included believe that enhancing economy would satisfy individuals.
It is undeniable that concentrating more on economy brings positive effects on people’s lives. One of the most significant merits is that basic needs are provided sufficiently for citizens in a prosperous country. It is obvious that accommodation, food and drink are basic things which people need for their lives and make them feel more satisfied. It stands to reasons that the more thriving countries are, the more content individuals are. Additionally, once state bodies in wealthy nations boost the quality of education, people will have more leisure time. In light of higher education, citizens could gain and broaden more knowledge, leading to an increasing number of people securing good employment. As a result, they have stable jobs so that they could allocate time reasonably for their families and friends, which makes society more cheerful.
Many disagree and feel that additional economic prosperity will not help people feel happier. It is clear that America - the wealthiest country in the world, which is not even close to the most satisfied, while Nigeria ranks much higher because people in Nigeria are satisfied with everything around them. Despite this, I reckon that America is still a happy nation. For instance, hospitals in America have good quality and doctors are well-trained and talented, many patients in Nigeria have to come to this country for curing or undergoing surgeries. Accordingly, thriving countries that accelerate their economy and other aspects will make people's lives more meaningful and delightful.
In conclusion, enhancing economic prosperity in various wealthy nations will bring loads of merits for individuals. This plays a vital role in people’s development and creates the best conditions for other aspects’ advancement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, still, well, while, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1751.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57643312102 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7835604209 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570063694268 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3102322281 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4375 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6875 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171234428756 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599666493432 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318633874401 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113881692847 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263781785493 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.