It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are generated and preserved.
The issue statement says that mostly cultural traditions are generated and preserved in cities. As we all know that cultural traditions are the wealth and repersentative of affluency of any nation. According to my opinion, i m not wholly do agree with the statement as one cannot say that all the traditions are preserved in cities only. To explain my point of view, reasons are explained below;
Firstly, as we all know that traditions had started since the evolution of man. Man being a social being, lives in the society and make traditions according to their need and recreational value. Many of the traditions are followed from past while some are changed according to the need and time. Some old traditions are made in the villages and as the people migrant from villages to cities traditions go along with them. Thus merely the traditions are generated in villages and preserved there. For example love marriage in most parts of India is still not allowed. Villagers are the one who preserve their culture at any cost.
Secondly, with modernization as everything has changed it has affected traditions too. Moreover, as people in the cities are more educated and advanced they change traditions according to their need. Thus old traditions are modified in cities, from where further changes are carried out by next generations. The best example of this can be seen in punjab, as before marriage ladies perform giddha, but that is now replaced with dj and rock music and this changing tradition is somewhat also followed in villages. From where new traditions become followed.
Last but not least, we can say that primary generation of traditions was started in villages, from where they have been spread to the cities. It is the cities where further modification of traditions take place. People of villages strictly adhere to their traditions while those of cities are somewhat ready to change.
To sum i restate that primarily traditions are generated in villages and mostly preserved there while in cities due to modernization and advances in literacy rate people change these traditions according to their needs and their capability. Thus the villages are the basic roots of tradition where it is preserved and these people mostly avoid to change their tradition at any cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, thus, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05013192612 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68622317264 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469656992084 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.840047993 60.3974514979 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.95 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280309218798 0.243740707755 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102153440881 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596864284525 0.0758088955206 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180491966501 0.150359130593 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363390119248 0.0667264976115 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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