One of your friends ask you to be a partner in his new business.
write a letter to reply him:
- give your opinion about your friend's business idea
- tell him weather or not you have decided to accept his offer
- and explain your reason for this decision
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to thank you for giving me some time to think about your business proposal.
I think it's a great idea to open a café in X street since there is no other cafes in the area. In addition, there is a good parking space in the neighborhood which is very important for the clients.
I'm afraid that I have to turn down your generous offer. To tell you the truth, I've thought deep and long about it and I think it's not the right time for me to get involved in this project. Honestly, it's difficult for me to cover my share.
As you know I have a full time job and I don't want to quit my job at the moment. So, it'll be difficult for me to have a full time job and committing the café as well.
I'm sure you'll make a success out of this café.
Best wishes,
Rahi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...bout your business proposal. I think its a great idea to open a café in X street...
^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...h is very important for the clients. Im afraid that I have to turn down your ge...
^^
Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... generous offer. To tell you the truth, Ive thought deep and long about it and I th...
^^^
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ught deep and long about it and I think its not the right time for me to get involv...
^^^
Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...over my share. As you know I have a full time job and I dont want to quit my job at t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 42, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s you know I have a full time job and I dont want to quit my job at the moment. So, ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 121, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... So, itll be difficult for me to have a full time job and committing the café as well. ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...job and committing the café as well. Im sure youll make a success out of this c...
^^
Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...committing the café as well. Im sure youll make a success out of this café. Bes...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uccess out of this café. Best wishes, Rahi
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, if, so, well, i think, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 667.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.04242424242 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09942053311 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593939393939 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9371530367 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.6363636364 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205365574121 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736219406888 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677426746956 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109850002244 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090424398503 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.56 8.71597938144 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.91 7.59969072165 78% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.