Essay topics: The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, stepping out of the house without the car waiting at the doorstep has become unthinkable. The dependancy has increased exponentially now than when the cars first graced the British roads in 1888. By 2000 this number had been predicted to go up to 29 million. Yes the concerns about such a boom was realistic, and so skeptisism started fogging the ownership and usage of the cars by public. International laws to regulate this growth was also thought to be a solution.
Possession and usage of cars is a matter of personal freedom, laws restricting the same will play havoc not only on the will of the people but will also affect the production, employment, thus decreasing the GDP of many countries, entire sections of the society would be devastated. Not to mention the distress, emergency situation crisis. and potential outrage that may be the end result of imposing such laws.
No doubt, the increasing pollution and depletion of natural resources, like oil is a major concern to the world at the time, when global warming is the tragedy of the day. So yes, the people should be made aware of the harm that is occurring and the ways they can help to nullify or at least reduce the effect. Car pooling, encouraging other transport by discounting and easy availability will make the people consciously ditch the car occasionally and use other means. It will also give them a sense of accomplishment of trying to save the nature while having the security of their personal freedom of owning a car.
it would be a win win situation if we convince the people to not entirely rely on their personal cars at all times, and to occasionally use public transport or other means to commute.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: And
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Suggestion: It
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: win
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, while, at least, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78231292517 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75554712118 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0331269497 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.153846154 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251872351064 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792201318979 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513851717152 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140367318434 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607700841293 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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