100 years ago people thought that human race was steadily making progress in all areas of life, nowadays there is less certainty that is so. In what areas do you think the most important progress has been made so far? In what areas more things need to be done?
Humans, probably the only animal on the Earth who is in possession of the most complex thing called a brain, which is capable of carving out complex theories and think new possibilities. Possessing these abilities humans have marveled in many areas. People think that, a century ago, we were progressing steadily, but now, it looks like we have hit breaks in some areas. I will discuss what are the areas human aspired together with the ones which still needs our attention.
For the starters, it is affirmative that we have aspired in many areas. Medical science advancements invented many treatments curing, at one time fatal diseases. To illustrate, diseases like TB, Cholera, Malaria and much more are curable now. Coupled with successful treatments of critical body parts like eyes, nose, ears, knee, back. Amalgamation of these treatments has led to comparatively healthy life now. Power and energy also represent human achievements. Not to mention the invention of the internet making the world a smaller place and people are more connected than ever.
Despite these fabulous achievements, there are certain areas still in dark. Earlier I mentioned medical science and its advancement, yet diseases like AIDS, Cancer is not curable, such are in grave need of research. Human marveled in the field of energy and power using several resources but failed to recognize and treat serious consequences of polluting our environment. Knowing about an answer to this, we are not moving ahead at the pace required, in the fields of cleaner and much less harmful renewable sources of energy.
A country should more focus on the unexplored areas which can be beneficial. Further, use of the major inventions until now has led to the serious consequences and there are no real steps in resolving that. Countries should together focus on that issues and advance a technology at a good pace in fruitful direction.
To summarize, it is absolutely true that the technological advancement has surpassed new heights in many areas but in certain areas, it needs to be accelerated and in the right direction of course.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1772.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13623188406 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79140216844 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6439168614 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2631578947 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15789473684 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163219347085 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443090044681 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465822378899 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858837738722 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410514567912 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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