Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the development of the village.

Submitted by amol2475 on Sat, 08/05/2017 - 08:42

The Map depicts the informataion about development of Chorleywood village over a span of 126 years between 1868 & 1994.

In the first phase between 1968 & 1983, the plot of the land which is situated in West adjecent to one of the main road was developed. In 1909, railway line were laid with construction of chorelywood station Located in South-Western part.

During the period between 1883 & 1922, the area of the land on the South-Western region was developed. From 1922 to 1970 The surface of the land on the left side of the main road as well as in close proximity to railway line that means in south were build out.

In the year 1970, a Motorway running parallel to one of mainroad was built. In the last phase development was completly spread out, During this time, development was seen at the intersection of motorway & main road and also at the junction of rail & motorway. The period between 1970 & 1994 saw a development of maximum stretches of land.

In conclusion, the village changed significantly due to th development of various Facilities.

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...mataion about development of Chorleywood village over a span of 126 years between...
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...etween 1883 & 1922, the area of the land on the South-Western region was develope...
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... region was developed. From 1922 to 1970 The surface of the land on the left side...
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...eft side of the main road as well as in close proximity to railway line that means in south wer...
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...ity to railway line that means in south were build out. In the year 1970, a Moto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86399721639 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572222222222 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.292856399 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3333333333 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0919292560286 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430745915396 0.103423049105 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523846091748 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649892430087 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573084731352 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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