How do movies or television influence people's behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Movies or television do have influenced very strongly on people's behavior. This media influence may be positive or negative on ones behavior. People usually spend lot of time watching movies or television and also sometimes people relate movies or television stories with their life stories or experiences. Here are some reasons and examples.
First of all, it depends on individual's perspective on watching good or bad movies or television. There are many educative programs which helps all generation people to get knowledge. For instance, by watching national geography, discovery we can find...
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Anju
Sentence: Drama related
Sentence: Drama related movies or television show make us to express our feelings.
Description: The fragment show make us is rare
Suggestion: Drama related movies or television show made (or makes) us to express our feelings.
Sentence: Drama related movies or television show make us to express our feelings.
Description: The fragment show make us is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace make with verb, past tense
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