A city wants to help teachers of its high school students (ages 14-18) improve their teaching. It is considering two plans:
1. Choose a small group of excellent teachers; these teachers will attend a class led by an expert for traditional training in how to teach effectively, and they will then come back to their school and provide that training for other teachers in school.
2. Provide additional training in teaching effectively for high school teachers, using online material that each teacher will study individually.
There is no doubt that teachers have played a prominent role in all societies. Due to its paramount importance, efforts for elevating their effectiveness in society have been always amongst governments' top priorities. No one can deny the direct and indirect effects of teachers in our private lives. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether all of teacher must be taught for new information or choose a small group of excellent teachers. Some may hold the view that the class must be online and all of teachers shall participate in the class. However, some others take an opposite view and declare that only excellent teacher attend a class and when they come back, they teach their new information to other teachers. I, despite the general consensus, contend that the first view carries more weight. In what follows, I am going to aptly delve into my perspective.
First of all, one should take into account the fact that it is justice that all teachers have a same teaching course during their job life. According to principal law of my country, all people must use same and free teaching system. I believe that the teachers are a vital role in developing country. When the government spend money for teaching, all of them must use this opportunity. The result of recent study conducted in my country indicates that over 98 percent of parliament man believe that all of teachers must raise their knowledge by the class ever summer.
The second reason that I would like to bring about this topic is that it is not true that the excellent teachers are all-round in every field. If some of teachers have been teached by government, they have a family problem that they cannot participate in class. So they miss the material that it may important. However, they cannot transfer all material to other co-workers. Take a personal experience as an example; When I was a student, I went to seminar. But I had a bad headache in the first day and I miss the important part of seminar. When I came back to my university, I could not pass my research as well .
The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified is that by selecting the professional teacher for this carrier, it can hurt to opinion other teachers and decrease their willing in the class. All of the time, everyone thinks that who is the best employee. So when they do not candidate for this job, they think it is not fair and change their mind to their managing system. Also they alter to optimistic people in societies. Psychologist have conducted many researches which indicates that 68 percent of people have a bad view about this matter and they believe it decrease their performance on their work. The government do this job for rising the teaching quality. So by this decision, they go to opposite way.
From what has been discussed above, we safely reach the conclusion that every teachers must be up to dated according to new information that they learn in online class. It has been mentioned that the online class is the most cheap method and the government can save their budget for other infrastructure like building of school, health of students, etc. Consequently, it is highly recommended that some session of class take as physical that the teachers can ask their question. Also there are many merits that I cannot describe them in this article because of short time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 486, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'holds'.
Suggestion: holds
...l group of excellent teachers. Some may hold the view that the class must be online ...
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Line 1, column 772, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'consensus'.
Suggestion: consensus
...ation to other teachers. I, despite the general consensus, contend that the first view carries mo...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the teachers') or simply say ''some teachers''.
Suggestion: some of the teachers; some teachers
...achers are all-round in every field. If some of teachers have been teached by government, they h...
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Line 5, column 614, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ty, I could not pass my research as well . The last but not least reason by whi...
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Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
...s my research as well . The last but not least reason by which the claim is justified ...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
...nd decrease their willing in the class. All of the time, everyone thinks that who is the b...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ge their mind to their managing system. Also they alter to optimistic people in soci...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... view about this matter and they believe it decrease their performance on their w...
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Line 7, column 580, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
... about this matter and they believe it decrease their performance on their work. The go...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...at the teachers can ask their question. Also there are many merits that I cannot des...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, so, well, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 32.0 11.0286738351 290% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2815.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 588.0 407.700716846 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78741496599 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9242980521 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60950708776 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 277.0 212.727598566 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471088435374 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 855.0 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0716459699 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8064516129 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9677419355 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25806451613 5.45110844103 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203334909454 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525557810371 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507175505965 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122068932127 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477812630165 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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