The purpose of advertising is to get people know about some new or specific products. As a result, people buy it more because they know what exactly fits them, improves their lives. Some people say that commercials are made to make society buying products, just buy and not to think whether they need it or not. Others say that advertisement helps us in everyday life to save our time in searching things in internet or journals. You just see an advertisement and you know that you need it, it will help you.
Nowadays, there is a lot of professions connected with commercial. A plenty of people work everyday to make you want to buy products. They work on the cover of the product and , if it is expensive, on the advertisement shown on TV or billboards. An advertising video shows people how they can live or what they could be with their commodity. Our society is keen of spending a lot of time reading about celebreties so that a famous star can be invited to take participate in advertising video. This, definitely, will help you make decision to buy something or not.
I, personally, think that advertisement is made to help people. Watching or reading about something helps you to make decisions in everyday life. For example, I have got a headache. I do not know what medicine I need, I mean the name of medicine. But I remember well that song from the advertising on TV, where people dance and sing about a treat from headaches. And they sing the name of medicine several times, so that I remembered it well. I go to the local drugstore and buy it. Yes, it can be rather expensive, but I know it is good because it is paid off.
To sum up, there are two kinds of avertisement. The one's that annoying and making you buy the things you do not need and that which really help you to solve some everyday problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ith commercial. A plenty of people work everyday to make you want to buy products. They ...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hey work on the cover of the product and , if it is expensive, on the advertisemen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, for example, i mean, you know, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50301204819 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68380110551 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490963855422 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.2743314937 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1904761905 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8095238095 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.80952380952 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297433863008 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800674680264 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746330107352 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178853958652 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998735462897 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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