All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools.
Mandating that parents to volunteer at thier child's school would be an unreasonable policy. It would be harmful to both parents and employees of the school.
This would alienate both single parents and parents that work multiple jobs. Parents who are working multiple jobs may already be working a 70 hour work week. This is on top of raising a child. There is simply not enough hours in the day for someone in this situation to volunteer. They might have to resort to quiting one of thier jobs to do work for the school with no pay. It could be argued that, if one parent is working so streniously then the other parent could do the volunteer work. This argument is invalid because, many children only have one parent. This policy would actively punish single parents and parents with multiple jobs. These parents already face hardships the average nuclear family would not. This policy would only add another one.
In addition to this, parents are already sacrificing much of thier hard earned paycheck to the school. Private schools can cost exorbatant amounts, and while public schools are free to attend parents must still pay the price of; uniforms, books, calculators, and supplies. It is an unfair action to ask parents to preform free labor for the school on top of making them pay for it.
Further more mandating that parents volunteer also jeprodizes the school employees. The volunteer work that the parents would do would probably involve things such as suriving lunch or cleaning classrooms. There are already employees of the school who get paid to do these things. Replacing them with free labor, would be taking away the pay check they live off of.
Requiring parents to volunteer for thier child's school is unreasonable considering that; they are already donating much of their money to thier child's education, it jeprodizes jobs for shcool employees, and it is unfair to sinlge parents and parents who work multiple jobs.
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- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools. 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, still, then, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 58.6224719101 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 328.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95426829268 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38649025509 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4704709903 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 118.986275619 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 23.4991977007 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.95 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189153186658 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688495426369 0.0831039109588 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543188718242 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127606875419 0.150359130593 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418054307515 0.0667264976115 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.8420337079 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 100.480337079 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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