Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is John, I recently moved to New York from Chicago and am writing in connection with advertisement for job vacancy in your restaurant. I am currently looking for a job here and would like to work with you.
I did Hotel Management coarse from a very prestigious college of New York " Will Smith College of Hotel Management" with good grades. Later, I did my internship of one year from one of the famous hotels, "The Park Avenue" located in downtown of New York city. After which, I also worked as an assistant manager in that same hotel for two years.
When I read about this job vacancy in a news paper, I felt that I am perfectly suited for this job. I have the potential to convince the customer and to serve him/her in a best way. Although, I have many attributes such as intelligence, honesty, diligence. However, I think that my biggest asset is "Patience" because I strongly believe that it's the most essential quality that is required in this industry.
I am available from Monday to Friday from 8am to 11pm. I generally do not prefer to work on weekends unless there is an emergency. I hope that you will like my profile as I am very keen to work under your tutelage. I am looking forward to hear from you. My contact no is 1432-5467378.
Yours faithfully,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...ntly moved to New York from Chicago and am writing in connection with advertisemen...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nager in that same hotel for two years. When I read about this job vacancy in a ...
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Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...When I read about this job vacancy in a news paper, I felt that I am perfectly suited for ...
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Line 7, column 171, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ce the customer and to serve him/her in a best way. Although, I have many attribu...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Although, I have many attributes such as intelligence, honesty, diligence. Howeve...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e' because I strongly believe that its the most essential quality that is requ...
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Line 9, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... weekends unless there is an emergency. I hope that you will like my profile as I...
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Line 9, column 216, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... very keen to work under your tutelage. I am looking forward to hear from you. My...
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Line 9, column 237, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...der your tutelage. I am looking forward to hear from you. My contact no is 1432-5467378...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ng forward to hear from you. My contact no is 1432-5467378. Yours faithfully, ...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...-5467378. Yours faithfully, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70762711864 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97215786086 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0964809082 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142677130805 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534301806357 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06925820814 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944857415145 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707006043304 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.