Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is John, I recently stayed in your hotel and I am writing with regards to valuable set of papers left there during that time.
I am a bank manager and I had visited to your hotel to attend a meeting on 22/5/17 and i left on 23/5/17. I was residing in room no 1232 on second floor. I also attended a meeting at the conference hall on the ground floor. I am not quite sure but I think that I left those documents in my room while I was leaving.
The problem is that those papers are very authoritative and contains some crucial data that is required by the bank to keep an account of the customers assets. Hence they are significant for me and I really need to get them back. If I do not obtain them soon, it will impose a threat at my job.
Therefore, I request you to find them and send them to me through courier on urgent basis. My address is 1555# South avenue, New York. Contact number is 0245-34673845. I apologize for the trouble, but I want them as the bank cannot work without the essential information written in those papers.
Yours sincerely,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...otel to attend a meeting on 22/5/17 and i left on 23/5/17. I was residing in room...
^
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...siding in room no 1232 on second floor. I also attended a meeting at the conferen...
^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he conference hall on the ground floor. I am not quite sure but I think that I le...
^
Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...eep an account of the customers assets. Hence they are significant for me and I reall...
^^^^^
Line 12, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... those papers. Yours sincerely, John
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, really, second, so, therefore, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51024788374 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614634146341 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0940058137 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182793647931 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046722043534 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485305071915 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932413445762 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358839975791 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.