Some people think that money can buy all the happiness in life. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant examples to support your answer.
Everyone in the world wants his life to be comfy and happy. Therefore, some people think that through money we can get all happiness in life. I am also completely agreed with the statement with reason which is outlined below.
First of all, a person can make him happier by paying other people to do his time consuming chores. It does not matter whether you are rich or poor. If you feel pressed for time, your life satisfaction can be improved by trading money for minutes that you can use as you wish. A research conducted in U.S.A, Canada and Netherland has proved that more than 50% of people pay other people to do unenjoyable daily task in order to increase their leisure time to utilise it in own way to make themselves happy.
Secondly, through money we can not only buy leisure time but can also do the entire task or buy the things which make us happy. For example, a rich person can do shopping in every one or two times a week, go to expensive restaurant at weekend or make a holiday tour to local or abroad. And he can do all these things without any bothering of budget. In addition to it, an affluent person can purchase the things which make them happy like diamond necklace or luxury cars etc. Not only that, a wealthy person can even engage servants to take care of them and live life like a king.
Finally, by citing the above reason, it can conclude that money is a way to buy happiness which brings more positive feeling (like joy and enthusiasm) and fewer negative feeling (such as anger, fear and nervousness).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s you wish. A research conducted in U.S.A, Canada and Netherland has proved that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48398576512 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29732323618 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6478767013 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9230769231 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288019567875 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103149496307 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730168413553 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173522638662 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716838031854 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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