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The diagrams below show stages in the development of simple cooking equipment. Write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown.
There are three pictures showing the development of simple cooking equipment, from the simple thing using stone to clay shield then followed by adapting air and ash.
The first picture presents how people dealing with cooking equipment should understand how to use stone as the basic stove used for heating a long pot, which works by burning the wood. Next, the long pot has changed into the small ones which the stones are in clay shield. In the same time, the second cooking equipment still has the wood to work with. The last equipment shown in the diagram uses metal as the foundati...
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Sentence: The first picture presents how people dealing with cooking equipment should understand how to use stone as the basic stove used for heating a long pot, which works by burning the wood.
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No. of Words: 156 200
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 7 10
No. of Words: 156 200
No. of Characters: 741 1000
No. of Different Words: 92 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.534 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.75 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.261 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 48 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 35 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 22 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.47 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.454 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.647 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.06 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4