education for all is a fundamental fact for developed countries. education should be affordable and convenient for every citizen. some people believe that they should not be paying tax to support universal education if their kids are going to private schools. while other people insist for supporting public schools even their kids are not studying in that school. this essay will explain both views .
on one side some people believe that they should not pay school tax if their kids are not going to that school. they think that this is an extra financial stress for them. they think that they ...
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Sentence: in my opinion every one should support universal education system education is important for every one. no government is unless supported by all.
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