Pie Chart for source of energy.
The pie charts provide information on the energy consumption of 1991. These pie charts are in percentage breakdown. Sources of energies are Oil, Gas, Coal, Nuclear, and Hydro. There are three countries pie charts, which are United States, Western Europe, and China.
The major source of worldwide was Oil that is 40.2 percent. The second highest source of energy was Gas. Furthermore, Coal used as a source of energy in worldwide was twenty-eight percent. The lowest use for a source of energy was Hydro. In United States, the major source of energy was oil that was 1952 million tons. In addition, there was a small difference between gas and coal as a production of energy. The major production of energy in Western Europe was oil that was nearly fifty percent. The least usage of hydro in Europe that is 2.5%. Although, China was different from others because in other countries oil was a major source of energy but in China, oil and nuclear was least used. The primary source of energy in China was gas that was 79.3%.
In conclusion, the major production of energy from oil except for China. Moreover, the least use was nuclear and hydro as a source of energy.
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 58
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. 50
- Subject: “College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.” 50
- "Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the numb 60
- People's behavior is largely determined by forces, not of their own making. 50
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, except for, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78325123153 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43297894396 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428571428571 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6994433136 43.030603864 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.6875 112.824112599 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6875 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227714234826 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103100270715 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709312191121 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204183581126 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672404304944 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.