Dear Sir,
I am a patron customer of yours and I am writing to you to inquire the availability of an electric tandoor and a hand blender as I would like to purchase them from you.
I am in absolute need of these items, thus, I would like to buy them on urgent basis. In case, if these things are not available at your store currently, can It be possible for you to place an order for me? Also, I would appreciate, if you can give an idea about the prices of both the gadgets.
In addition, I want to know for how long you will be able to keep them on hold for me, so that I can arrange money to buy them on time.
Awaiting for your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
...n arrange money to buy them on time. Awaiting for your prompt reply. Yours sincerely ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 551.0 937.175257732 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11194029851 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23712623553 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 127.690721649 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 175.5 290.88556701 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5811326447 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231594903542 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933712302164 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785758603081 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132745651484 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895690471995 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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