There are certain considerations regarding impeding the quality of education. Some believes that Universities should raised the professors salaries to improve quality of educations ,whiles others have opposites views. I personally believes that universities should not increase professors salaries. My propensity is for following reasons.
The very first reasons comes in my mind is simply increase professors salaries would not contributes in quality of education because students in universities levels need well equipped libraries , laboratories and enough seating arrangement. Universities always face limited budget if they simply spend lots of money on salaries they would not be able to provide the students others requirements which are integral part of education. Spending more money on infrastructure and well established students research centers which greatly improve the our all quality of education also brings the fame to the university when students shows their best performance in their fields of studies.
Secondly, I believe that professors should not be grant highers salaries because university education is often very expensive, many talented student simply because of costly tuition fee cant,t get admission in university, by providing scholarship and grant them some financially support will bring talented students. Ultimately improves the education quality at university. Moreover, scholarships programs provides opportunities for many students to go out of country for higher education which is great for both the students and universities to get experience from international education system which gives real chance to improve education level in universities.
Due to aforementioned ground, I firmly believes that universities should not raise the professors salaries, by providing students all facilities libraries and research centers and financially support will help more in quality education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 43.0788530466 35% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 275.0 407.700716846 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.03636363636 4.8611393121 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11481273773 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.9117190506 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.909090909 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.5376344086 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20522284714 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961924672643 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350672014599 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145153619522 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427379748193 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 11.7677419355 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 58.1214874552 36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.10430107527 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.1575268817 163% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.05 10.9000537634 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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