Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. How far do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, one of the most important concerns of government authorities is the scarcity of physical activities among people especially young generation and they try to make motivation for children to overcome this issue by adding competitive sports into school curriculum. A group of people believe that competitive sports should not be as part of school curriculum. I do agree with this idea because of two main reasons which are limited school hours and the importance of studying basic lessons such as math, literature and the like.
It is true that schools’ time table is already full and they have no more time for adding programs such as competitive sports to their schedule and this will waste student’s time in long term. Besides, activities such as competitive sports will distract pupils and they cannot concentrate well on their lessons since being a winner seems appealing to children and they will work hard in order to achieve their aim that is being a victorious. To prove my claim, I can refer to an article, having been published in Time magazine, indicates that 40% of the British students who were involved in competitive sports during school time got unsatisfactory grades at the lessons during the competitions.
Another significant reason for avoiding competitive sports at schools is the crucial role of basic lessons in pupils’ future life. It is proved that learning basic lessons is indispensable for children to continue the higher education in the future which is a key in their success either in life or job. Although activities such as sport, art and music can be useful in children’s development, the importance of learning physic, math, literature and history should not be neglected at schools as they are the next authorities of the world and they should be trained in a reasonable way.
To sum up, children can learn some interpersonal skills such as team work and delegating tasks through competitive sports but this should not be part of school program and they should attend these activities in their leisure time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to physic'
Suggestion: to physic
...development, the importance of learning physic, math, literature and history should no...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...of the world and they should be trained in a reasonable way. To sum up, children can learn some ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, well, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16814159292 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90121855727 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530973451327 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8004180587 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.2 106.682146367 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.9 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142579954808 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734944795794 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600544665847 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986676024504 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554941053974 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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