Being alone vs. with friends
There is no denying the fact that friends and families exert a great influence on our lives and they are as precious treasures for us. But about the question of whether being alone or with friends there are two beliefs. A variety of people might argue that being sole meets their demands and expectations, but some others may subscribe to the opposite viewpoint and believe that it is unimaginable that we lead a rewarding and healthy life without presence of friends. From my perspective, I take a happy medium between these two assumptions and I am of the idea that it depends on how much spare and leisure time we have. I will elaborate my viewpoint through three noticeable reasons as follows.
In the first place, I subscribe to the view that presence of friends in our lives is an absolute necessity if we have enough time to company with them.in comparison to being without company, having royal and real and intimate friends brings us numerous and distinctive benefits.it is very enjoyable to talk with friends about many things, to learn a large number of new things from them and to company with them in interest places. We manage to talk with friends about a subject that is very close to our hearts, we manage to share our interests and experiences and concerns, we manage to visit a historical site, and to go cinema or concert with together.
In the second place, also friends are a source of inspiration and encouragement for us. They can bring about us the sense of the consummate happiness and joy. There is no disputing the fact that upright and trustworthy and down-to-earth friends set a good example for us and we can learn from their behavior and attitude. All real friends are in charge of their friends and families and if one of them has problems, other friends can pave the way for solving him/his problems, therefore can say that real close friends are the best supporter.
Last but not least, although the aforementioned reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at first glance, there is a myriad of viewpoints concerning negative aspects of technology and people make a valid point when argue that every coin has two sides. There is considerable evidence suggesting that having friends give rise to few problems for those who don’t have enough time to spend it with others. Some people are self-sufficient, self-reliant, and self-made and don’t need a friend to company them and they prefer to allocate their spare and leisure time to themselves. Also, there are sometimes during which everyone needs to be alone for thinking about their schedules and aims for future or for meditation and quietness without any friends.
To put it briefly, if one weighs the merits and demerits of the above statement, one soon realizes that presence of friends in our lives depends on our personality and lifestyle and the amount of time that we have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...as precious treasures for us. But about the question of whether being alone or with friends there are t...
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Line 2, column 349, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ith friends about many things, to learn a large number of new things from them and to company wit...
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Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...s. They can bring about us the sense of the consummate happiness and joy. There is no disputin...
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Line 6, column 332, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...uggesting that having friends give rise to few problems for those who don't h...
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Line 6, column 767, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion and quietness without any friends. To put it briefly, if one weighs the mer...
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Line 8, column 216, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le and the amount of time that we have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, if, may, second, so, therefore, in the first place, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 38.0 13.8261648746 275% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2399.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 496.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83669354839 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71922212354 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66928098402 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487903225806 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.8517705783 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.9375 100.406767564 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.6045352989 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272601399891 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929895712765 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108249702894 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146606585592 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624320633261 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.