In this modern and complex world exchange of information is very important for all of us. people use many source of getting information, one of them is internet. Some people believes that internet provides valuable information other,s believes that too much information cause problems. In my opinion, internet provides lot of valuable information.The reasons are as follows.
The very first reason internet have wide range of information which is most frequently update than other sources such as newspapers or books. peers review websites on daily bases and shear lot of valuable information with users.Students can access most of information regarding there assignments or on presentation which is not readily available on any other place.Also information on internet we can access any where by using our smart phones, laptops etc.IF we need any information around the world we just click few buttons and we can get all information about that place or person. So internet gives us most reliable source of information without any problem.
secondly, internet contain much information than any other source which makes us to get more credible information. internet contains websites which published authentic information, we can compare that information with other websites on internet for there credibility and authenticity.TO much information is not a problem its offers to have more information at the same place. Its save our precious time by searching information in short amount of time using few words.
Due to aforementioned reasons, I firmly believes that internet is more gives us more updated information and also more credible and save our precious time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e same place. Its save our precious time by searching information in short amount...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 260.0 407.700716846 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44615384615 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02578661101 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 106.201430318 48.9658058833 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 100.406767564 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262057559374 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120227594883 0.076458572812 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741152671586 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170050902746 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961103603822 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 11.7677419355 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 10.9000537634 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.