Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and more valued by the society in the past than they were nowadays
use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Gone are the days when people used to see their teachers as outstanding figures in their lives. Unfortunately I do agree with the fact that teachers are overlooked these days. My reasons of support are Technology and its effects on people, economic standing and higher level of education among societies.
First and for most, I see technology as an adverse cause to this fact. People in this day and age are more exposed to Science, Art and crafts thanks to advent of Internet. Meaning that, humans since childhood are more prone to use Internet than ever before. One can learn different kinds of language or participate in an on-line course of business or even learn abstract painting with just a brief search on YouTube. Nevertheless, Internet as a conspicuous offspring of Technology plays significant roles in our lives, it causes a great discouragement over teachers’ lives. We are not any longer dependent to our instructors in schools.
Secondly, this modern era seems not to flourish teachers' lives economically. Indeed, it may seems strange but having low or even mediocre income these days, cause people to see us less important part of a society. Hence, teachers who are mostly afflicted by low salaries would encounter some unpleasant attitudes more than ever before. Although it is a shame for civilized humans, teachers suffers from this sort of views. It is been a while that I haven't heard of a kid unfolding of his/her dreams as a future teacher which itself is a good proof of teacher not being honored these days.
Last but not least, higher level of education among people, in comparison to older times is an undeniable fact which helps to untie the issue. People these days are more educated. Some has gained knowledge in medical sciences, some has become astronauts, and some has become great artists and so forth. These well-educated figures may seemed more valuable characters to our people. For example, I remember once my grandfather was telling me about his school days. When there were not abundant of literate kids in his town. I remember, he acknowledged that the highest level of education in his time was "Cycle", which was six grades of rudimentary studies. Obviously, at my grandfather’s time people would have respected the ones who had taught their kids more.
In sum, teachers with great deal of efforts are now less appreciated than before. Arrival of Internet, more educated people and economical stage are the facts that are by no means be ignored regarding to mentioned issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: is
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Suggestion: agree that
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Suggestion: to abstract
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e ignored regarding to mentioned issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02843601896 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8409624401 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 246.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.250197005 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4166666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.45110844103 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152377060206 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449904167916 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421959098375 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924143607135 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246577216191 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.